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1.

witnessed by stars
cheshire cat
smiles


2.

snow discovery!
kitten dislikes
cold taste


3.

lolling by fire
paws tickle
warm air


4.

mew from kitchen--
empty bowl, again

5.

a cat does not
appreciate
delicate rose petals

6.

window protection
the cat watches
curious world


7.

Little black cat,
lily pollen:
orange stripe


8.

wicked claws strike
on unsuspecting terrier.


9.

slumbering prowess:
it’s a hard
life


10.

yellow eyes yearn,
paw pads
koi pool waters
©2009 `Beccalicious
:iconbeccalicious:

Author's Comments

EDIT: I know I am behind a little, trust me I will catch up over the next few days! I'm to try and write3-5 a day till I am back on board!

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ssh!

I wasn't going to do HaikuWriMo this year as I have other writing things on the go. However the nearer I got to the begining of February, the less I could resisit!

I did say something to `MSJames about using cat references in all 28 haiku, but we'll see.


Also- I thought it would be really funny to have this lovely picture of my own cat, Jaffa, who clearly doesn't approve of the snow!

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:iconsynconi:
:giggle: What a sweet little image, I love the air of joyous secrecy...

Very similar to `jade-pandora's! :lol:

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:icongaioumonbatou:
Adding you to the list! :lmao:

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:iconjade-pandora:
becca-girl!

maybe re-title this --- "they would never believe us"
:O

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:iconmsjames:
Oh there you are!

Look though, seems that cats are popular these days!

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It's ok though, I wrote a similar too in one of the haikuwrimo's ;)

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may Beelzebub's scrotum rest firmly on your chin
:iconiscariot-priest:
Couldn't stay away from the madhouse, eh. How fitting, a reference to Alice. =p

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:icongrimeden:
I love that you didn't follow the English restrictions of the form.

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:iconsingsorrow:
Second cheshire cat one I've seen, but both are unique and beautiful. :)
:iconmode-de-vie:
I love the cheshire cat, and any and all references to Alice in Wonderland. :P This is simple and very cute- it made me feel warm inside. :aww:

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:iconb1gfan:
Ahhh a wonderful start :D And I see that both you and Jade are on about the Cheshire cat :) Perhaps there is a trend developing.
:iconirrevocablefate:
Aw, I love how this immediately gives an image of that Cheshire grin. :heart:

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