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Literature Text
i.
Our bench:
rows of fairy lights rope
towards the turbulent city
Warm evenings, playing in the park,
till your mam came shouting .
Every night of summer.
You never cared how different we were.
ii.
Toilet paper decorates leafless trees and
your lungs fill with newly discovered smoke as
You admire your handiwork.
The sexes split. You tease
the girls for attention.
iii.
Those amber lights merely rows
upon rows of ugly terraces all designed by the same architect.
We never talk.
iv.
You were seen
with your hands
down her trousers
tomorrow you will blame intoxication.
v.
Under the red skies, we exchanged memories like
veterans warmly recalling fallen friends. Swings rocked
in the winds, squeaking slowly sharing our dynamic;
juxtaposed on that faithful bench. You told me you hated what
you had become.
Red turned grey turned black,
drizzle soaked our skin.
You held me close as we walked
back to your house--
It wasn't your first time
I ignored the pain.
vi.
You never visit the park anymore.
I haven't seen you since the day
you called me
a whore.
vii.
You're eighteen now. Rumours
tie knots between you
and heroin.
I took a walk up the hill today;
On our bench two children sat.
To them, the fairy lights still glimmer and
the echo in the wind, blissful.
Our bench:
rows of fairy lights rope
towards the turbulent city
Warm evenings, playing in the park,
till your mam came shouting .
Every night of summer.
You never cared how different we were.
ii.
Toilet paper decorates leafless trees and
your lungs fill with newly discovered smoke as
You admire your handiwork.
The sexes split. You tease
the girls for attention.
iii.
Those amber lights merely rows
upon rows of ugly terraces all designed by the same architect.
We never talk.
iv.
You were seen
with your hands
down her trousers
tomorrow you will blame intoxication.
v.
Under the red skies, we exchanged memories like
veterans warmly recalling fallen friends. Swings rocked
in the winds, squeaking slowly sharing our dynamic;
juxtaposed on that faithful bench. You told me you hated what
you had become.
Red turned grey turned black,
drizzle soaked our skin.
You held me close as we walked
back to your house--
It wasn't your first time
I ignored the pain.
vi.
You never visit the park anymore.
I haven't seen you since the day
you called me
a whore.
vii.
You're eighteen now. Rumours
tie knots between you
and heroin.
I took a walk up the hill today;
On our bench two children sat.
To them, the fairy lights still glimmer and
the echo in the wind, blissful.
Literature
322010.
i want to be a cigarette.
because every time your hands stumble across one, you wrap your fingers tightly around it. your eyes show a sense of salvation, a sense of oh-God,-i've-wanted-you-for-so-long. with a flick of your fingers, it lights up a smile as bright as the sun.
Literature
while reading poetry
you read this poem upside down
on your bed, blankets curled
on the floor like a sad dog.
you hope the new perspective
will provide new understanding.
stop that.
stop trying to understand.
you are reading this poem by the edge
of the ocean and the birds circle over
your head like a feathery halo.
your heart pumps to the beat
of the waves which no longer crash
but whisper.
you try to catch what they are saying,
only catch sea foam in your hair,
and sand between your teeth.
stop that.
stop thinking that everything in this world
is here to teach you something.
sometimes things exist just to be.
try it sometime,
maybe afte
Literature
steps.
one.
the first step is always
the hardest, like learning
to breathe and swim and wish
and sometimes, you sink and
sometimes, you need someone
to rescue you.
but when you finally learn,
it's like locks clicking and
hearts singing and holding
hands and suddenly,
everything makes sense.
.
two.
you held sadness
close to your chest, content knowing
this is something no one
can take away.
and then you start to think
that maybe, happiness could work like this,
too,
and wouldn't that be amazing?
.
three.
realize that you
want to have happy dreams
to put in photo album memories,
and you want
to write a letter
to yourself
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2nd draft.
With a bit of help from PoeticWar I've cut a fair bit of it.
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After lovetodeviate's poetry workshop at Writers-Workshop on writing in the second person, apocathary and I were discussing characters in such poems. I said that I thought the 'you' has to be a character, where he said that the narrative needed a character. So this poem is an attempt to create both.
This isn't a personal experience bar the image of a park on a hill overlooking a sea town.
With a bit of help from PoeticWar I've cut a fair bit of it.
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After lovetodeviate's poetry workshop at Writers-Workshop on writing in the second person, apocathary and I were discussing characters in such poems. I said that I thought the 'you' has to be a character, where he said that the narrative needed a character. So this poem is an attempt to create both.
This isn't a personal experience bar the image of a park on a hill overlooking a sea town.
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This is so gorgeous and amazing.