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She left you a letter
outwitting at last the greatest.
A photograph, filched;
a King’s humiliation.

In your eyes she
holds the highest.

Three guesses what I am reading at the moment :)

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TristanCody Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Writer
Very solid ending. At first it was a very peaceful feeling. I felt comfortable with what was going on, but then you hit us with the last half of the first stanza and the finishing couplet which just took me away. I like the story telling aspects, too. Definitely a piece worth reading again! :clap:
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