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I know he lurks;
alert eyes behind the sofa
waiting, waiting.
Suddenly a paw torturing
these feet, yanking at
my socks

Crawling the pond edge
musing perhaps how cold
it might be, the creature
Pats delicate yet
Springs back in terror;
He won't be soaked today.

Stolen comfort, he
Places himself in prime
Spot- my chair
No longer
my chair. Only
the shake shake of biscuits
allow his ginger tail to bob
into the kitchen
expecting.

Begrudgingly, he plants
his purr-box up against
my side. The gentle scratch
behind his ear reminds
us both, he's always
in charge.  
Nothing too serious and a little cliche, but here is a little poem I wrote after using the "Verses poetry" app for the iphone to start me off.

I miss my cats :(
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:iconchadwood:
chadwood Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012   Writer
Fun writing! My cat's inspire a good bit of my poetry.
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Itti Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this a lot, especially the first two verses - the image of the cat that's called up is very vivid.

Made me think of my cat. I miss her too :(
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maxnort Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012   Writer
I once trained a cat for treats. it was a 3 step process:

1.1st shake of can: treat time, come to "the location" and wait.
2. 2nd shake: okay to jump up and get treats
3. 2 treats, no more, no less. if less, meow at me until I give it. if more, leave it, never eat it.

side effect: when I snored, she bit my toes. if my toes were covered, she'd sleep on my head.
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Dessert-rose Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!! "purr-box" Haha! I love it! :D
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LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Professional Writer
Awww~! My cat likes to lay on my lap when I'm on the computer, but she swipes at me when I try to type. :iconcatlaplz:
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SadisticIceCream Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012   Writer
I've never had a cat, but this makes me want one. Sounds exactly like other cats I've met. :)
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Janoera Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Cats sound so sweet.
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
Gotta love cats. ^^
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futilitarian Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012   Writer
My own cat is currently headbutting the computer, so this is rather apt. I think she wants chicken.

Why do cats always steal whatever seat you've been in?


>^.^<
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:iconitti:
Itti Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Because it's warmer than the seats no-one has sat in.
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